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Superb.

I actually liked the crackling sound. Since this is a glitchy type song, it fit perfectly :D Nice job dude, really love the flow of this track, had a really strong structure, had great glitch effects, really cool drum and bass. Keep up the good work. Do more of this style :D

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mjattie responds:

hey, thanks a lot!

I'm glad you liked it and I will do more of this style off course xD

[Rig - Print 'n Bass]

Wow.

I'd fuck that printer.

Rig responds:

You have exquisite taste.

[Rig - VOT FIVE]

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Rig responds:

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[_=Dj-C -Blue ReMiX=_]

Want some critic?

Cons

1) too much compression
2) the drums were overcrowding everything
3) the piano was overcrowding everyhthing
4) the drums even came off beat, that was really weird
5) it's a midi ripoff... must have done a WHOLE Lot of work to do a midi rip off
6) this song is basically 16 bars that repeat over and over again
7) the melody was overused
8) the bassline is weak
9) needs smoother transitions

Good
1) the melody... well it's not yours so.....this is a cover song?

Chimy727 responds:

Now thats just being over dramatic.
and cant you fricking read, it says REMIX!
and btw is not a midi, i made this myself while listening to the song for a very long time.
plus, the melody's change if you take the time to listen to the song.
and the drums are not off beat.
and how are the drums overcrowding everything if you said the piano was?
i believe they are well balanced.

suck on that

[.Aspiration. [Trance]]

LISTEN

THIS IS NOT TRANCE. IT'S DANCE. CHANGE IT. arrrg. Yeah. If you really want to know what trance is go look up Above and Beyond dude.

Cons
1) this is not an original dance piece. tons of people used this chord progression so stop using it.
2) tons of people have made this melody
3) tons of people use nexus presets or sytrus presets so start trying to make your own sounds
4) your bass is boring, try and be more creative
5) use better percussion, those sounds are very recognizable. also have crashes or reverse crashes, there were none which made this song worse
6) the ending was horrible, didn't even fit with the whole song
7) use more automation
8) your song uses too much compression. take off fl limiter on your master channel.
9) work on your arrangement structure, it's all over the place
10) use a lot more time on making tracks, and we don't care how long you worked on a song. take the time to make it sound good.

Goods
1) kinda catchy.

well there you go, that's me being honest.

PS. for those of you who hate people that criticize songs than why don't you pack up your 2 minute attention span brain and go away . we are actually being honest. -

--- keep it up.

b0b3rt responds:

I've been told all this before.. you would have known that if you'd bothered to read the other reviews.

[[LK] Dazed [WiP]]

Not bad man.

I actually really like this. It still has your style but it sounds different.

If you plan on expanding this, please do try and make this not cluttered. Mix with the volumes and EQ so that it won't peak.

If you work on this long enough and with a lot of effort.. this could be a really great track.

Take longer on your tracks and the more experience you get the more ideas you'll have and the better you make tracks.

LK412 responds:

DAMMMIT!!!!!!!!!

THE ONE TRACK SEALANDER LIKED AND I LOST THE FLP!

SHIHISHIHTIHISHIHT

Ill remake it for sure sometime.

Thanks for the review, and ill keep the tips in mind.

[[LK] Despair]

huh

seems like you gave up basshunter.

and your music is sounding a lot better. ...

because it's different.

even though you will get more recognized with generic music on newgrounds, you would make better friends if you make something that isn't generic :D

LK412 responds:

I'm still going to do my old style (its what i love) but im also going to make different genres.

Yea but you and many others were right, my songs started sounding very similar to each other.

Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it :D

[DjTyph - Let's Do The Mario!]

Hey

Let's fuck Mario.

Prodigal responds:

TO JAPAN WE GO!

[Wait (A 60's Rock Experiment)]

Cool stuff.

This is different than what most newgrounders do, but it sounds really cool. I liked the vocal work, good job with that. Keep up the great work man.

BonesUndug22 responds:

Thank you. Sorry I waited so long to respond.

[-Just Smile-]

Come on man..

this could've been signed for shits and giggles! keep it up ;p

Mrmilkcarton responds:

Nah still not good enough.