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Awesome dude.

Congrats on being #1. This finally something new. And it sucks how much people don't like this.. but anyways, it's a good song. Keep up the good work.

Superb.

I actually liked the crackling sound. Since this is a glitchy type song, it fit perfectly :D Nice job dude, really love the flow of this track, had a really strong structure, had great glitch effects, really cool drum and bass. Keep up the good work. Do more of this style :D

5/5 10/10

mjattie responds:

hey, thanks a lot!

I'm glad you liked it and I will do more of this style off course xD

Wow.

I'd fuck that printer.

Rig responds:

You have exquisite taste.

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ps. it's rezie <3

Rig responds:

lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol!

LOL

THIS ISN"T TRANCE OMG NOOB. wow you lost this battle. ckc2009 pwns your ass already even if he hasn't made a trance song. god this song is terrible. has like no chord progression in it, no real melody, the mix is soo cluttered. everything is playing LOUD LOUD LOUD. that is bad.

there is no bass at all, only mids and highs.

TL;DR = you lost this battle and you are a fucking hypocrite. get better before hitting on other people noob.

kthxbye.

Want some critic?

Cons

1) too much compression
2) the drums were overcrowding everything
3) the piano was overcrowding everyhthing
4) the drums even came off beat, that was really weird
5) it's a midi ripoff... must have done a WHOLE Lot of work to do a midi rip off
6) this song is basically 16 bars that repeat over and over again
7) the melody was overused
8) the bassline is weak
9) needs smoother transitions

Good
1) the melody... well it's not yours so.....this is a cover song?

Chimy727 responds:

Now thats just being over dramatic.
and cant you fricking read, it says REMIX!
and btw is not a midi, i made this myself while listening to the song for a very long time.
plus, the melody's change if you take the time to listen to the song.
and the drums are not off beat.
and how are the drums overcrowding everything if you said the piano was?
i believe they are well balanced.

suck on that

LISTEN

THIS IS NOT TRANCE. IT'S DANCE. CHANGE IT. arrrg. Yeah. If you really want to know what trance is go look up Above and Beyond dude.

Cons
1) this is not an original dance piece. tons of people used this chord progression so stop using it.
2) tons of people have made this melody
3) tons of people use nexus presets or sytrus presets so start trying to make your own sounds
4) your bass is boring, try and be more creative
5) use better percussion, those sounds are very recognizable. also have crashes or reverse crashes, there were none which made this song worse
6) the ending was horrible, didn't even fit with the whole song
7) use more automation
8) your song uses too much compression. take off fl limiter on your master channel.
9) work on your arrangement structure, it's all over the place
10) use a lot more time on making tracks, and we don't care how long you worked on a song. take the time to make it sound good.

Goods
1) kinda catchy.

well there you go, that's me being honest.

PS. for those of you who hate people that criticize songs than why don't you pack up your 2 minute attention span brain and go away . we are actually being honest. -

--- keep it up.

b0b3rt responds:

I've been told all this before.. you would have known that if you'd bothered to read the other reviews.

Fuck

Send me the full version dude, I always send you mine ;)

<3

Not bad man.

I actually really like this. It still has your style but it sounds different.

If you plan on expanding this, please do try and make this not cluttered. Mix with the volumes and EQ so that it won't peak.

If you work on this long enough and with a lot of effort.. this could be a really great track.

Take longer on your tracks and the more experience you get the more ideas you'll have and the better you make tracks.

LK412 responds:

DAMMMIT!!!!!!!!!

THE ONE TRACK SEALANDER LIKED AND I LOST THE FLP!

SHIHISHIHTIHISHIHT

Ill remake it for sure sometime.

Thanks for the review, and ill keep the tips in mind.

oh..

I guess sarcasm isn't allowed on newgrounds anymore.. and can't write negative reviews anymore... so....

good song? maybe?

oof

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